100 Word Challenge for Grownups: Escape

This week’s story prompt from Julia is “….the extreme weather meant…“, and she asks us to add a hundred words of our own to turn the prompt into a story.

There’s a crumb of reality behind my little fable – years ago, I came across a book about a small valley in New Guinea which, according to the writers, had a nearly perfect climate. Jack, and his story, are straight out of my imagination.

Please tell me what you think of it!


Nobody could fool Jack. To him, the extreme weather meant disaster looming. Time to escape to the world’s best climate – he just had to locate it. No traceable internet research; he read about his refuge in an old book, traveled to New Guinea, hired a driver.

Who loved to talk. “You wouldn’t believe how we’ve changed. My grandpa only ever thought about raising pigs. Now look around – roads, electricity, why, I’ve got my own web site.”

“What for?”

The driver grinned. “Help grandma market the pigs. Where were you going again?” Jack repeated the name of the perfect valley. The road wound higher past a hydroelectric dam. The car stopped. “Hope you can swim.” An expansive gesture toward the lake. “It’s down there, all flooded.”

17 responses to “100 Word Challenge for Grownups: Escape

  1. A bit like Lake Powell, Utah, where we once went on a houseboat vacation for a week. It used to be a beautiful canyon area. Sigh.

  2. Nothing stays the same. Well written story.

  3. Oh no its too late, everything is different (you often make me feel that!)

  4. Progress…yes..sudden leaps and jumps, crushing what may be crushed. True tale really..

  5. Oh what a shame. I do feel sorry for him in a way…..but he really should have checked!

  6. Nice! I like what you did with that!
    Check out mine: http://tinyurl.com/bg4ugbj

  7. Oh dear, what a shame. But, with all the technology he had he should have checked it out first!

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